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Κείμενο από MR-GLOT - English

  • factors which determinate happiness

  • Everybody seek their own happiness throughout live.
  • Some of us look forward the future and smile but others look backward the past and feel sad.
  • Part of those differences between us may cause by our biology.
  • Moreover there are factors which help us on this aspect these are money and health.
  • Although money does not give us happiness, it helps us to be healthier, to feel more safe or to buy every material thing that you want.
  • Another factor which help us to be happier as I said previously it is health.
  • When you are healthy and you do not have any problem you are able to do what you wish because you don’t have any limitation.
  • Lastly when you have good friends and close people around you it is another way to be happy.
  • Because human being are social animals since early in time.
  • To conclude, there are several factors which determinate happiness in human being like biology, money, health or relationship with others.

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