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Berivan99 (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

Hello, there!
First, I hope you all are doing well and enjoying your days.
Today I'm really sad because I got a bad grade in the test although I've learned a lot before writing the test.
Maybe I should have concentrated more.
:( Anyway, from now I will do my best and learn more than before I promise.
I will stop wasting my time on listening music or watching tv although sometimes watching tv can be also useful when watching in English to practice my English skills.
I really don't know what to do :-( .
But I will keep learning because I don't want my parents to be disappointment with me that makes me more sad and cray

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문장 1
- First, I hope you all are doing well and enjoying your days.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Today I'm really sad because I got a bad grade in the test although I've learned a lot before writing the test.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Maybe I should have concentrated more.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- :( Anyway, from now I will do my best and learn more than before I promise.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I will stop wasting my time on listening music or watching tv although sometimes watching tv can be also useful when watching in English to practice my English skills.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I really don't know what to do :-( .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- But I will keep learning because I don't want my parents to be disappointment with me that makes me more sad and cray
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7