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  • America

  • People immigrate because they might want to escape from their country, from the poverty.
  • The country might be on war, or the gouvernement might be too hard.
  • They hope to have a better future.
  • We can take the example of Famine in Ireland, people would like to save their life and to protect their family, so they migrated from Ireland to USA, Canada, Australia or England.
  • The second example is the Syrie Civil War.
  • About 11,6 Million people fled the country.
  • They might escape from the inequalities between men and women in their country, between the richest and poorest.
  • In India, if discrimination exists among men and women, then discrimination among citizens exists too.
  • No one can change the caste into which they are born or marry someone belonging to another caste.
  • That's why some people are going away from their country : they disagree with discrimination.
  • The second reason of immigration is so as to discover a new country, to discover new cultures, to take a break, to study...
  • When we travel, we are able to improve our languages, we learn in experience.
  • We can meet new people, see breathtaking landscapes...
  • Taking a gap year is an excellent way to discover new cultures.
  • We saw the reasons of the immigration, so a lot of people immigrate each year.
  • There is 6.7 million immigrants in France, against 42.8 million in the United States.
  • But people especially immigrate in America Nowadays, people are expecting an American Dream.
  • They want to make one's living, to find a job, an accomodation, to get more opportunities...
  • They want their children to go at school.Song from Bruce Springsteen « American Land ».
  • Through this, he explains what a young immigrant can think about America.
  • His aim in the future is to settle down in USA, to live the American dream.
  • He thinks that every American can live in luxury and wealth if they want to.
  • Nearly 8 million people settled in the United States between 2001 and 2005, which is really high.
  • Immigrate to USA can be really difficult.
  • In 2006, 1.2 million clandestine were stopped while trying to enter to the United States  To be able to go to the United States, Mexicans tried several different things: they even tried to go there via manhole covers.
  • In « helping the dreamers », Obama wants to improve the living conditions of the immigrants by facilitating the crossing of borders.
  • This is called « the dream act » Canada currently has one of the highest per capita immigration rate in the world, driven by economic policy and family reunification.
  • Canada is a multicultural country.it was the first country in the world to turn its policy of multiculturalism into legislation In the document « borders, in one good story, that one » by thomas king we can see the experiences of a mother and her son caught in no-man’s land between Canada and the United States, defending their Blackfoot identity.
  • Borders do not only divide countries, it can divide families too.
  • To conclude, people immigrate because they want to flee their country, to flee inequalities, or to discover new cultures.
  • The special case of immigration in America is mainly due to the American Dream, but this really hard to gain access to America.
  • We can wonder what immigration brings to America, it may bring a rosy future.

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    • We can take the example of Famine in Ireland, people would like to save their life and to protect their family, so they migrated from Ireland to USA, Canada, Australia or England.
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    • They might escape from the inequalities between men and women in their country, between the richest and poorest.
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    • In India, if discrimination exists among men and women, then discrimination among citizens exists too.
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    • The second reason of immigration is so as to discover a new country, to discover new cultures, to take a break, to study...
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    • Nearly 8 million people settled in the United States between 2001 and 2005, which is really high.
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    • In 2006, 1.2 million clandestine were stopped while trying to enter to the United States  To be able to go to the United States, Mexicans tried several different things: they even tried to go there via manhole covers.
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    • In « helping the dreamers », Obama wants to improve the living conditions of the immigrants by facilitating the crossing of borders.
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    • This is called « the dream act » Canada currently has one of the highest per capita immigration rate in the world, driven by economic policy and family reunification.
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    • Canada is a multicultural country.it was the first country in the world to turn its policy of multiculturalism into legislation In the document « borders, in one good story, that one » by thomas king we can see the experiences of a mother and her son caught in no-man’s land between Canada and the United States, defending their Blackfoot identity.
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    • To conclude, people immigrate because they want to flee their country, to flee inequalities, or to discover new cultures.
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    • The special case of immigration in America is mainly due to the American Dream, but this really hard to gain access to America.
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