Korjaukset

Text from 1_Dimon - English

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  • The velocity of humanity's development process has been stiffly multiplied since the implementation of blade-edge technologies.
  • Naturally, aftermaths and consequences of that changes adroitly grasp their own place in each of citizenships in raw of highly developed countries and cities.
  • Reflection of that transformation after entering era of information, could be easily spouted in overpatching for worker's common life schedules and timetables.
  • Nowadays, a successful personalities does not have even a time for cooking a meal, more and more number of people are staying in a case of emergency.
  • Priority of ingesting food at home has been going gradually in past.
  • The necessity of fast lunch is shoving to idea of visiting junk food and restaurants.
  • Obviously the famous dependency told us that demand burn supply, compels construction industry to devise projects for building food courts.
  • Apparently, the pointed situation are widespread and presented entirely in heavy industry oriented city of mine.
  • And the question about foundation of restaurant in my neighborhood annually becomes increasingly actual for city's authorities.
  • However, beforehand of asserting a restaurant construction, I believe that all cons and pros should being weighted and appraised firmly.
  • And the first fact, that needs to be taken into consideration, is citizenship's approximate revenue and inhering to class of income.
  • Analyzing of public opinion and expenses show us the obvious correlation between people classes and class of demanded food court for a certain area.
  • Nearest territory of neighborhood had been planning even before world war 2 as an locus of factory's workers accomodation, because the area has been aimed for foundation of an aviation factory , which building has been successfully completed at 1939 year.
  • In a presence of fact, that from practically 20 thousands town folks about 10 more or less are being engaged in elaboration for factory and average income of does not supply them with an opportunity of weekly nutrition in a restaurant.
  • As an addition, more than half morosely pull their mortgage credits.
  • Consequences of that actions provides us with an significant occasion for doubt in validity of a restaurant building.
  • For achieving most effective conclusion, for another scale the indisputable fact should be placed - every new facility and company building represent a perfect feasibility to work, provides city with plenty number of work places, and probably, allows to fulfill potential passion and desire for some citizienships, whose only had been dreaming previously about being involved in such consumer oriented business as restaurant is.
  • And I believe, that path of presenting more dimensions, extension for urban's to grow up, is a crucial point for reducing criminality situation, take a win in a struggle for clear and legal labor market and utterly in city developing.
  • By the way of conclusion, responding to question, I would like to offer for our authorities be more proactive and initiate evaluation the situation in generally due to performing vote list.
  • It should contents of information about planning restaurant, what benefits for people will be performed, occupations, average salary level.
  • Establishing interaction and cooperation with a lot of references with urban community allows us to make the most effective decision related to restaurant constructing.
  • And gives us a powerful leverage for improving our life conditions.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

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    • The velocity of humanity's development process has been stiffly multiplied since the implementation of blade-edge technologies.
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    • Naturally, aftermaths and consequences of that changes adroitly grasp their own place in each of citizenships in raw of highly developed countries and cities.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
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    • Reflection of that transformation after entering era of information, could be easily spouted in overpatching for worker's common life schedules and timetables.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
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    • Nowadays, a successful personalities does not have even a time for cooking a meal, more and more number of people are staying in a case of emergency.
      Äänestä nyt!
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    • Obviously the famous dependency told us that demand burn supply, compels construction industry to devise projects for building food courts.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7
  • Lause 8
    • Apparently, the pointed situation are widespread and presented entirely in heavy industry oriented city of mine.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8
  • Lause 9
    • And the question about foundation of restaurant in my neighborhood annually becomes increasingly actual for city's authorities.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9
  • Lause 10
    • However, beforehand of asserting a restaurant construction, I believe that all cons and pros should being weighted and appraised firmly.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10
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    • And the first fact, that needs to be taken into consideration, is citizenship's approximate revenue and inhering to class of income.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11
  • Lause 12
    • Analyzing of public opinion and expenses show us the obvious correlation between people classes and class of demanded food court for a certain area.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12
  • Lause 13
    • Nearest territory of neighborhood had been planning even before world war 2 as an locus of factory's workers accomodation, because the area has been aimed for foundation of an aviation factory , which building has been successfully completed at 1939 year.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 13
  • Lause 14
    • In a presence of fact, that from practically 20 thousands town folks about 10 more or less are being engaged in elaboration for factory and average income of does not supply them with an opportunity of weekly nutrition in a restaurant.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14
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    • Consequences of that actions provides us with an significant occasion for doubt in validity of a restaurant building.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16
  • Lause 17
    • For achieving most effective conclusion, for another scale the indisputable fact should be placed - every new facility and company building represent a perfect feasibility to work, provides city with plenty number of work places, and probably, allows to fulfill potential passion and desire for some citizienships, whose only had been dreaming previously about being involved in such consumer oriented business as restaurant is.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 17
  • Lause 18
    • And I believe, that path of presenting more dimensions, extension for urban's to grow up, is a crucial point for reducing criminality situation, take a win in a struggle for clear and legal labor market and utterly in city developing.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 18
  • Lause 19
    • By the way of conclusion, responding to question, I would like to offer for our authorities be more proactive and initiate evaluation the situation in generally due to performing vote list.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 19
  • Lause 20
    • It should contents of information about planning restaurant, what benefits for people will be performed, occupations, average salary level.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 20
  • Lause 21
    • Establishing interaction and cooperation with a lot of references with urban community allows us to make the most effective decision related to restaurant constructing.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 21
  • Lause 22