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Work
On the weekend, I work with my father.
He has a car rental company.
When I am working there, I am exploring my strengths in employment area and improving my personal background. .
Moreover, my strengths in community services I am good at relationships with people.
It makes easy to be achievable in taking responsibility. .
Two years ago I joined a charity service in Turkey.
I sold our creative stuff like knitted coat and grant the all income for orphan children in this charity service.
Malcolm Watts touched a good point about university, it is like a iceberg we only know little thing before university.

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- On the weekend, I work with my father.
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句子 2
- He has a car rental company.
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句子 3
- When I am working there, I am exploring my strengths in employment area and improving my personal background. .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Moreover, my strengths in community services I am good at relationships with people.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- It makes easy to be achievable in taking responsibility. .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Two years ago I joined a charity service in Turkey.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- I sold our creative stuff like knitted coat and grant the all income for orphan children in this charity service.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- Malcolm Watts touched a good point about university, it is like a iceberg we only know little thing before university.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8