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  • April 12nd

  • Today is April 12nd, today is Friday, Today I'm sick, but it ain't so bad, because today I saw a friend that I don't saw since long long time.
  • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she were in the hospital because she broke her leg.
  • The doctor (my cousin) said that she need see a blood type, then I went to the room where the nurse took my blood type, and later my cousin said to me: "yo are OK, you need rest" Last night, I sang all night a song that I hear on the radio.
  • I guess that I feel alone without Xiomy, she know that I might go for her but she doesn't want, because she is visiting her uncles.
  • This morning I felt that she called to me by my name, it was rare because always she call to me "chikis", was like I need her pamper.
  • Tomorrow I go to school, then I need my homework and it will be one lonely night, but all is on my mind, I need be strong and wait for her.

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  • 문장 1
    • Today is April 12nd, today is Friday, Today I'm sick, but it ain't so bad, because today I saw a friend that I don't saw since long long time.
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  • 문장 2
    • When I saw her, I knew that she was my friend, then I ran to hug to her, she were in the hospital because she broke her leg.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • The doctor (my cousin) said that she need see a blood type, then I went to the room where the nurse took my blood type, and later my cousin said to me: "yo are OK, you need rest" Last night, I sang all night a song that I hear on the radio.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • I guess that I feel alone without Xiomy, she know that I might go for her but she doesn't want, because she is visiting her uncles.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • This morning I felt that she called to me by my name, it was rare because always she call to me "chikis", was like I need her pamper.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • Tomorrow I go to school, then I need my homework and it will be one lonely night, but all is on my mind, I need be strong and wait for her.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6