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Moving to America
My name is Aline and I'm 40 .
I come from France, Lyon, but from 9 years, I live in New Caledonia, a French Pacific island that is close to New Zeland and Australia.
Next year, I'll have to move to United State for work, and I absolutly need to improve myself in English (American).
So I'm here to meet some Americans peoples who can help me to learn their language, correct my mistakes (and I suppose I make a lot) and share experiences and opinions.
In return, I can help in French if you need.
Thank you and see you soon !

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- My name is Aline and I'm 40 .
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- I come from France, Lyon, but from 9 years, I live in New Caledonia, a French Pacific island that is close to New Zeland and Australia.
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- Next year, I'll have to move to United State for work, and I absolutly need to improve myself in English (American).
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- So I'm here to meet some Americans peoples who can help me to learn their language, correct my mistakes (and I suppose I make a lot) and share experiences and opinions.
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- In return, I can help in French if you need.
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- Thank you and see you soon !
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