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  • Ngos' coverletter

  • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
  • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
  • I once had an experience in my town (i come from Lyon, in France).
  • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
  • I helped them about two months during the winter.
  • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
  • The main goal was to help them to do daily tasks, listen to them and that they feel well-integrated in the society.
  • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
  • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me (like solidarity or tolerance).
  • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
  • I think its a very open-minded organisation.
  • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
  • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
  • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
  • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
  • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
  • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
  • I saw some documentaries and it seems to be a very beautiful country with its bay and its landscape.
  • I also imagine that the locals are very “warm”, kind, open-minded and helpful.
  • I also suppose it’s a country with many beautiful traditions and I’d like to discover them.
  • I think they respect their traditions, can live in harmony with nature, help each other’s, are generous and like to share.
  • I’d like to go there because honestly I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
  • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
  • I hope I really could do some projects for the children and spend a lot of time with them.
  • Secondly I also hope I could improve my skills in educational and health methods.
  • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.

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    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
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    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
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    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
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    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
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    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
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    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
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    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
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    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
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    • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
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    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
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    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
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    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
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    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
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    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.
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