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Hi to all, I'm Maria and I'm 23 years old.
I'm from Greece and I hope that one day I will be able to speak English fluently.
I have just became a member here so don't know how it works.
This is my very first message.
As a Greek my mother tongue is the Greek language and thus, if you want to help you learn or improve your Greek, I'll be very glad to do so.
Additionally, I hope there is someone here who wants to help me improving my English by correcting my production. :-)

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문장 1
- Hi to all, I'm Maria and I'm 23 years old.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm from Greece and I hope that one day I will be able to speak English fluently.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I have just became a member here so don't know how it works.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- This is my very first message.
  투표하세요!
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문장 5
- As a Greek my mother tongue is the Greek language and thus, if you want to help you learn or improve your Greek, I'll be very glad to do so.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- Additionally, I hope there is someone here who wants to help me improving my English by correcting my production. :-)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6