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The Board of directors, I'm writing to express my concern about the closing of the Westgarth Cinema.
I wish you know that Westgarth Cinema is is the treasure of our town.
There were shown the hundreds premiere of the famous films.
Every week our cinema provides citizens with an interesting perfomances.
It allows the coffers to grow up.
Moreover, there are 3 big malls in our town but only one big cinema.
So we needn't malls any more,we need Westgarth Cinema.
As well there are a lot of land and buildings for sale in the centre that can make way for the new shopping mall.
I'm sure some of the solutions can be found and I look forward to receving your response.
Yourth saithfully, Ann Parker.

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- The Board of directors, I'm writing to express my concern about the closing of the Westgarth Cinema.
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- I wish you know that Westgarth Cinema is is the treasure of our town.
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- There were shown the hundreds premiere of the famous films.
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- Every week our cinema provides citizens with an interesting perfomances.
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- It allows the coffers to grow up.
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- Moreover, there are 3 big malls in our town but only one big cinema.
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- So we needn't malls any more,we need Westgarth Cinema.
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- As well there are a lot of land and buildings for sale in the centre that can make way for the new shopping mall.
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- I'm sure some of the solutions can be found and I look forward to receving your response.
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- Yourth saithfully, Ann Parker.
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