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letter to a friend.
Hi Anne, It's great reading your letter.
I usually go to the cinema twice a month altought I would like to go there more, but the cinema is very expensive for young people like us.
Last weekend I saw a film whose name is "Twilight" , which was about a romantic story between a vampire man and a human woman.
As you know, vampires likes human blood and it is was a danger for she.
Finally he broke-up with her to protect her.
I really love this film and now I am impatient for the second part , which I hope it has happy ending and the two characters stay together finally.
I recommend you this film, I am sure that you love it. Take care. Sofia.

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- Hi Anne, It's great reading your letter.
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- I usually go to the cinema twice a month altought I would like to go there more, but the cinema is very expensive for young people like us.
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- Last weekend I saw a film whose name is "Twilight" , which was about a romantic story between a vampire man and a human woman.
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- As you know, vampires likes human blood and it is was a danger for she.
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- Finally he broke-up with her to protect her.
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- I really love this film and now I am impatient for the second part , which I hope it has happy ending and the two characters stay together finally.
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- I recommend you this film, I am sure that you love it. Take care. Sofia.
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