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  • Defending your life

  • I found out the films with Meryl Streep accidentally when I was ill.
  • I`ve just fallen in love with her.
  • I want to say about one of these films.
  • It is called Defending your life.
  • There is an unusual plot.
  • This story is about a man Daniel who dies in the car accident.
  • Then he finds himself in Judgment City.
  • It is like waiting area before next phase of human`s existence and it looks like a health-resort.
  • There are hotels, service-staff, entertainments and restaurants.
  • And all around looks like in a real life on the Earth.
  • He sees other people who also died.
  • All of them including Daniel are dressed in white clothes.
  • Next morning Daniel has an appointment with his lower.
  • He tells him, that people on the Earth use so little of their brains and that big part of their lives they feel fear.
  • People live in order to fight with their fears and doubts; they should improve themselves to go to the next phrase after they die.
  • And then judges in Judgment City decide who goes forward and who comes back to the Earth.
  • So they discuss a few days of the Daniel`s life.
  • During the process he meets and falls in love with a cute woman Julia (Meryl Streep).
  • They spend evenings together, go to the unusual cinema where people can even see their previous lives.
  • The proceedings don`t go well for Daniels.
  • Judges see that Daniel hasn`t overcome his fears.
  • The final nail in his coffin is when he declines to spend night with Julia and confesses that he is afraid.
  • Judges decide Daniel should come back to the Earth and try again.
  • Meanwhile Julia succeeds at her proceedings.
  • She is brave and confident.
  • And she must go forward to the next phase.
  • In final scene they sit in different buses.
  • Daniel loves Julia, but he can`t go with her.
  • He is upset and desperate.
  • Suddenly he escapes from the moving bus.
  • He runs to the Julia`s bus, but he can`t get inside.
  • He gets an injury, but he doesn`t give up.
  • Judges see Daniel behave brave and he fight.
  • Finally they open the doors.
  • So Daniel and Julia come to the next level together.
  • Such a sweet story! :)

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