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What a wonderful day!
Like the song ...
I'm so happy about this sunny sunday.
Like on holidays, my hunsband and I gone to the market, buying fishes and vegetables.
No barbecue today but we had lunch at the garden.
It was so cool !
Unfortunately, day spend too quikly and tomorrow back to work !

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- Like the song ...
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- I'm so happy about this sunny sunday.
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- Like on holidays, my hunsband and I gone to the market, buying fishes and vegetables.
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- No barbecue today but we had lunch at the garden.
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- It was so cool !
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- Unfortunately, day spend too quikly and tomorrow back to work !
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