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Text from Nai-98 - English

  • INTRODUCTION

  • At present, in many countries the work done by older women at home, does not receive the same benefits as men.
  • For most people, to be a housewife is not considered a job when so much effort and dedication is required.
  • However, the salary that they should receive annually is USD 74.000 approximately.
  • Taking this situation into account, this essay will examine the issue of discrimination, poorly valued housework, the believe of housewife as a natural obligation for the women, then some solutions will be provided.

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