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Text from Emilie6 - English

  • Nelson Mandela

  • I choose to tell you about Nelson Mandela's life because he is a famous man who earn a lot of respect.
  • It's thanks to him the Apartheid was abolished in South Africa.
  • The Apartheid was a racist government, directed by white men who put away blacks men.
  • This political regime was between 1948 (nineteen forty-eight) and 1991 (nineteen ninety-one).
  • Nelson Mandela was born the eighteenth July 1918 (nineteen-eighteen) in South Africa.
  • He was a tribal leader son.
  • He was called Madiba in his tribal.
  • In 1941 (nineteen forty-one), he studded the law in the University for black student of Johannesburg.
  • It was at this moment that he understood really the inequalities of the Apartheid.
  • Nelson Mandela was a pacifist men.
  • In 1952 (nineteen fifty-two) he opened a blacks lawyer's office in Johanesbourg, and became a leader of the ANC (African National Congress).
  • ANC was a political party which defended blacks men's law.
  • The trigger event was a manifestation which was organized by ANC where policemen killed 69 (sixty-nine) men.
  • And where ANC was forbidden by authorities.
  • Nelson Mandela set up sabotage because the pacifist method were useless.
  • He was arrested in 1962 (nineteen sixty-two) and get life sentence.
  • People liked Mandela and a lot of people objected the Apartheid.
  • He wanted the Mandela release.
  • A song was even written...
  • He was released in 1990 (nineteen ninety), thanks to Frederik de Klerk the New President who negotiated about Apartheid abolishment with him.
  • In 1994, Mandela was elected president and they was awarded three years later.
  • He was dead the 5 (five) december 1993 (nineteen ninety- nineteen ninety-three), leaving his third wife, Graça Simbine, three children and a world sadden .
  • He had two other children who was sadly already dead too...

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