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  • I graduated from middle school in 20.. and began training as a cutting machine operator at the company ... .
  • After the completion of my training in the years 20.., I started to work for the subsidiary “...” as a machine setter for bevel gear grinding machines and gear cutting machines.
  • During car economic crisis in the year 20.., I looked for new opportunities for my Career future.
  • I worked until the autumn of 20.. in various departments in my company and began a dual study at a University of cooperative education.
  • Since this time I work on a job rotation at the office.
  • But since a year I work the most time for the sale and I calculate the products and write VBA-programs for excel for a better and faster work.

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    • After the completion of my training in the years 20.., I started to work for the subsidiary “...” as a machine setter for bevel gear grinding machines and gear cutting machines.
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    • I worked until the autumn of 20.. in various departments in my company and began a dual study at a University of cooperative education.
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    • But since a year I work the most time for the sale and I calculate the products and write VBA-programs for excel for a better and faster work.
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