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  • Leaders and War

  • Many centuries before , people who used to own thoughts used to control their own tribes ,regions and even the biggest parts of the world , those were leaders,kings and emperors .
  • Many other people who had no chance to be leaders chose to follow because of their weakness or ignorance and some of them did rebellions and became rebels to fight monopolism and slavery and die for the same reason many innocents are still dying for , their right to lead their own life and to create the world they believe in , without bloody wars that dictators made consciously leading their thought's slaves who fought unconsciously for one interest instead of thinking in their owns .

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    • Many centuries before , people who used to own thoughts used to control their own tribes ,regions and even the biggest parts of the world , those were leaders,kings and emperors .
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    • Many other people who had no chance to be leaders chose to follow because of their weakness or ignorance and some of them did rebellions and became rebels to fight monopolism and slavery and die for the same reason many innocents are still dying for , their right to lead their own life and to create the world they believe in , without bloody wars that dictators made consciously leading their thought's slaves who fought unconsciously for one interest instead of thinking in their owns .
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