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Text from Cel92 - English

  • My day

  • Today was a day like the other.
  • I woke up me at 7:00 am, then I took my breakfast and after I took my shower.
  • When I was done, I went to see my boyfriend.
  • We were all the afternoon together, but I was very tired so easily angry against him.
  • So after 2 hours together, I prefered to come back to my home and see my family.
  • We were hang out, we were outside in a garden in Paris.
  • The weither was bad but we needed to take a rest.
  • It was my day.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English