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  • Achievements: Started work a new direction: started selling a new product for the company, attracted the first customers, increased profitability of the company by 2%; Formed a close-knit team of the commercial department; Concluded a number of key contracts on supplying the main raw material with foreign suppliers (Romania, Korea, China), with following successful operation.

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    • Achievements: Started work a new direction: started selling a new product for the company, attracted the first customers, increased profitability of the company by 2%; Formed a close-knit team of the commercial department; Concluded a number of key contracts on supplying the main raw material with foreign suppliers (Romania, Korea, China), with following successful operation.
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