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16.5
I drew a tiger this morning and Mimi phoned me quickly.
They had fixed my car.
I have been to the gym in the afternoon after a lunch at mega much.
I worked out my chest and did some shoulders.
Afterwards I went to walsall College, we had writing test the subject was about a car boot sale.
I went back hme and had a bowl of white rice with chili.
Marion was in my bedroom we talked a bit then she got in her bed.

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- I drew a tiger this morning and Mimi phoned me quickly.
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- They had fixed my car.
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- I have been to the gym in the afternoon after a lunch at mega much.
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- I worked out my chest and did some shoulders.
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- Afterwards I went to walsall College, we had writing test the subject was about a car boot sale.
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- I went back hme and had a bowl of white rice with chili.
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- Marion was in my bedroom we talked a bit then she got in her bed.
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