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  • May 17th..

  • Our proposal is to improve the tie system before the moment of transporting motorcycles and his parts.
  • Our proposal is to improve the tie system before the moment of transporting motorcycles and his parts.
  • Because some of the products are damaged when they are distributed, this generates costs for the company because it has to invest in repairing damaged products.

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