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Text from Symmons - English

  • 17.5

  • I woke-up early because it was very warm in my bedroom and the light came through the windows.
  • I made a smoothie, Marion was having her breakfast.
  • After that I met Freddie at puregym he wanted I went with him in his club for a session.
  • After struggled with the password for the entrance we got in and I had to filled a form on computer and got free password for one week.
  • We worked out back and biceps.
  • Afterwards we had a lunch at Mega much and I followed Freddie to his house.
  • He live right at the top of a residence 7 floors.
  • He gave me a orange juice and we talked together.
  • I met Marion at 5.15 pm when she dropped off the bus and went to poundland where she bought some varnish.
  • We got the bus and went back home, having dinner together and she phoned to her parents.
  • Mimi tried to phone me but was unsuccessful.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English