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  • june 2015 — september 2015 4 months Company name XXXX Field of activity: Common consumption goods (non-food) Head of sales department Managed the department activity of searching for new customers: - set taskes to managers - Monitored the implementation of the tasks - Controlled and checked quality and quantity of calls

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    • june 2015 — september 2015 4 months Company name XXXX Field of activity: Common consumption goods (non-food) Head of sales department Managed the department activity of searching for new customers: - set taskes to managers - Monitored the implementation of the tasks - Controlled and checked quality and quantity of calls
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