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  • i want to speak a good english!need help

  • hi everyone!is me!
  • today,i will go to the beach with friends!im presently in hollydays in caraib with my family!the temperature is 28° and the water of the beach is so hot!yesterday,i stay in the beach all the day because i was in paris and it was so coold.i like my job,my family and my life,juste want complete the english language to make my life parfaite!
  • thank everyone to give yours help!

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    • today,i will go to the beach with friends!im presently in hollydays in caraib with my family!the temperature is 28° and the water of the beach is so hot!yesterday,i stay in the beach all the day because i was in paris and it was so coold.i like my job,my family and my life,juste want complete the english language to make my life parfaite!
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