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Hello !
I come from Nancy.
It's a city in France.
I write this paragraph because i want to know if i make a lot of mistake in English !
I'm student in computer science.
I like sport : ski, climbing and a lot of other.
When it's summer holiday, i work in a factory who make granit stone working.
I have too put the big rocks on a conveyor belt and after the machine can work.
When it's finished, i take the rocks and put those on wooden pallet.
And when it's winter holiday, i work in a ski resort.
I'm ski instructor.
The both allow me to have more money for school period.

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- Hello !
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- I come from Nancy.
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- It's a city in France.
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- I write this paragraph because i want to know if i make a lot of mistake in English !
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- I'm student in computer science.
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- I like sport : ski, climbing and a lot of other.
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- When it's summer holiday, i work in a factory who make granit stone working.
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- I have too put the big rocks on a conveyor belt and after the machine can work.
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- When it's finished, i take the rocks and put those on wooden pallet.
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- And when it's winter holiday, i work in a ski resort.
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- I'm ski instructor.
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- The both allow me to have more money for school period.
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