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Le Tout Nouveau Testament
What if God lived in Brussels?
And he wasn't good.
He liked alcohol, crackers and football.
He wasn't too smart.
He tyrannized his wife and daughter, but he was even worse with his earthly children.
What if because of him they had a lot of problems?
I liked one idea of this film.
The protagonist of the film, the god daughter, made mailing with dates of death of all people on earth.
What about we all knew our dates of death?
How would this information change our lives.
"Le Tout Nouveau Testament" wasn't the best movie I've ever seen, but, at least, it wasn't boring.
But I wouldn't recommend it for too religious people without any critical thinking.

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- Le Tout Nouveau Testament
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- What if God lived in Brussels?
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- And he wasn't good.
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- He liked alcohol, crackers and football.
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- He wasn't too smart.
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- He tyrannized his wife and daughter, but he was even worse with his earthly children.
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- What if because of him they had a lot of problems?
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- I liked one idea of this film.
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- The protagonist of the film, the god daughter, made mailing with dates of death of all people on earth.
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- What about we all knew our dates of death?
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- How would this information change our lives.
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- "Le Tout Nouveau Testament" wasn't the best movie I've ever seen, but, at least, it wasn't boring.
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- But I wouldn't recommend it for too religious people without any critical thinking.
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