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Please help me to to tell a story in indirect speech.
turn into indirect speech.
the story about a young man Dorian Gray whose physical appearance is handsome and innocent.
An aspiring artist paints a beautiful portrait of Dorian.
Dorian wishes that he always look like his youthful appearance in the portrait.
The wish comes true.
Dorian remains the same – youthful and charming, but the portrait begins to transform itself into the image of his soul.
He uses his good looks and charm to obtain whatever he desires in life.
His insensitivity drives a friend to suicide.
The evil desires of his heart eventually cause him to murder a friend in cold blood.
Over a period of twenty years, Dorian becomes a monster on the inside (reflected by the portrait of his soul) even as he remains youthful and innocent on the outside.

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- Please help me to to tell a story in indirect speech.
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Sentence 2
- the story about a young man Dorian Gray whose physical appearance is handsome and innocent.
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Sentence 3
- An aspiring artist paints a beautiful portrait of Dorian.
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Sentence 4
- Dorian wishes that he always look like his youthful appearance in the portrait.
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Sentence 5
- The wish comes true.
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Sentence 6
- Dorian remains the same – youthful and charming, but the portrait begins to transform itself into the image of his soul.
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Sentence 7
- He uses his good looks and charm to obtain whatever he desires in life.
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Sentence 8
- His insensitivity drives a friend to suicide.
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Sentence 9
- The evil desires of his heart eventually cause him to murder a friend in cold blood.
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Sentence 10
- Over a period of twenty years, Dorian becomes a monster on the inside (reflected by the portrait of his soul) even as he remains youthful and innocent on the outside.
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