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Note to a neighbour
Hello Mr Smith, The postman delivered You a package.
He had asked me Can I pick up it.
Take the opportunity I want ask you that Can you give me back toaster because I need it.

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- Note to a neighbour
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Sentence 1
- Hello Mr Smith, The postman delivered You a package.
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Sentence 2
- He had asked me Can I pick up it.
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Sentence 3
- Take the opportunity I want ask you that Can you give me back toaster because I need it.
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