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please.
hi my name is Cecilia.
i'm 23 years old, i'm from Tijuana .
I need write and learn English for my work but i'm verry silly for the lenguaje.
Please can you help me?

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- hi my name is Cecilia.
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- i'm 23 years old, i'm from Tijuana .
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- I need write and learn English for my work but i'm verry silly for the lenguaje.
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