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i would like to talk about my experience in a championship of kick boxing .
It's my favourite sport because it helps to build body and have a good respiration.
When i had championship i was serious and my coach was so hard and also i trained more and more to have a good niveau

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- i would like to talk about my experience in a championship of kick boxing .
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- It's my favourite sport because it helps to build body and have a good respiration.
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- When i had championship i was serious and my coach was so hard and also i trained more and more to have a good niveau
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