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Could you make correct my sentences ?
i ssuppose a perfect day must be included jogging ,doing sports, taking rest in short part of day.
On the other hand meeting friends could be good on your perfect day.

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- i ssuppose a perfect day must be included jogging ,doing sports, taking rest in short part of day.
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- On the other hand meeting friends could be good on your perfect day.
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