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Text from Adrian_200 - English

  • Drawbacks and benefits of living in a village.

  • I live my whole life in a village.
  • They are different opinions about this question.
  • Life in a city has undeniable drawbacks and advantages as same as life in a village.
  • In the first place in a village is quietly and calmly.
  • Many people consider that they can't live in hustle and bustle and village is satisfying for them.
  • Village is rather place without noise.
  • Another benefit is that villages are healthier than cities.
  • Air is pure and surrounding isn't dirty.
  • However opponents point out that in city exist many entertainment places as cinemas, playgrounds, restaurants and others.
  • They say that village is boring.
  • In addition people from village have to cover longer distance to work every day than urban people.
  • Moreover living in a flat may shirk from hard work after job work.
  • City people don't mow the lawn and have more leisure.
  • On balance for me urban life is easier than village life, but many people don't agree with me.
  • They are right and I also because everybody needs something different.

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