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I have a brother and sister.
We have very different personality.
For instance, my older brother is quite stubborn but i am not like that.
According to him, he is always right.
He doesn't listen to others what they think, he always do what he think.
on the other hand, my little sister is rather easy-going person like me :) in some ways, we have similar.
For example, we all are very fun-loving. we all get on well in spite of my older brother.

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- I have a brother and sister.
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- We have very different personality.
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- For instance, my older brother is quite stubborn but i am not like that.
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- According to him, he is always right.
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- He doesn't listen to others what they think, he always do what he think.
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- on the other hand, my little sister is rather easy-going person like me :) in some ways, we have similar.
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- For example, we all are very fun-loving. we all get on well in spite of my older brother.
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