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Hello everybody I'm a french girl, i really want to perfect my english because I hope move in UK and maybe USA.
I search a penpal who can help me and if you want I can help you in french in return.
If you are interested send me a message.

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句子 1
- Hello everybody I'm a french girl, i really want to perfect my english because I hope move in UK and maybe USA.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I search a penpal who can help me and if you want I can help you in french in return.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If you are interested send me a message.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3