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Please correct for me. Thank you so much.
In the morning and in the afternoon, they was going pass as usual as everyday.
At 5p.m, I went to school with my brother.
I ran to the library and opened the door.
But i don’t have the ticket so I just can read here for this time.
Then we learned.
We played game. But i lost.
I was unwinking in 5 minute so my eyes were tired.
We learned in happy.

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- In the morning and in the afternoon, they was going pass as usual as everyday.
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- At 5p.m, I went to school with my brother.
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- I ran to the library and opened the door.
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- But i don’t have the ticket so I just can read here for this time.
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- Then we learned.
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- We played game. But i lost.
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- I was unwinking in 5 minute so my eyes were tired.
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- We learned in happy.
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