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Please correct for me. Thank you so much.
Today is a long day.
This morning wasn’t good.
I was so tired.
This afternoon, I went to Hoan Kiem Lake again and I met somebody.
I met an American teacher.
She’s very beautiful.
She teaches both in Ha Noi and in the USA.
She lives in one small state.
In that, The popular food is bread.

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- Today is a long day.
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- This morning wasn’t good.
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- This afternoon, I went to Hoan Kiem Lake again and I met somebody.
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- She’s very beautiful.
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- She lives in one small state.
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- In that, The popular food is bread.
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