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Celebration of birthday of my cousin
Hello everyone!
I have got a cousin and she studying Psichology at University.
Today we celebreted her birthday, she complied 21 years old and in this celebrations were my mom, my dad, my siblings, my nephew and niece and my cousin.
She arrived to my house at midday for lunch, her mother is not here, she is in Europe but she called for greet her.
My mom made her food favourite and she bought a cake for her and after lunch we sang Happy Birthday.

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- Celebration of birthday of my cousin
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- Hello everyone!
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- I have got a cousin and she studying Psichology at University.
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- Today we celebreted her birthday, she complied 21 years old and in this celebrations were my mom, my dad, my siblings, my nephew and niece and my cousin.
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- She arrived to my house at midday for lunch, her mother is not here, she is in Europe but she called for greet her.
  투표하세요!
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- My mom made her food favourite and she bought a cake for her and after lunch we sang Happy Birthday.
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