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Text from Dwigth - English

  • An Amazing day on the airport

  • Hi everyone!
  • Well, today was a good day, the airport accepted a visit from my school, so my entire class and I went to a tour.
  • When we arrived on the airport, the chief of security it was waiting for us on the first door!
  • He explains everything about the airlines security and what he does on his job.
  • Then he ask to us what we thing about the relation of the airport to our career(e-marketing and media) .
  • Then he was called for an important thing and leaved the room.
  • So the chief of the commercial area was our guide.
  • He show us all the different parts that complement the airport, and we can saw the firefigthers department, and wear his special clothes.
  • This days was spectacular!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English