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My first writing
Hi everyone!
I'm begginer in this language so I need to improve my English level but, at the same time I'm in love with it.
If I write any word a little bit weird, I would like to apologize.
I would be grateful if you take a few minutes for correct this test. See you!
I hope you've a nice day :)

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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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- My first writing
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- Hi everyone!
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Sentence 2
- I'm begginer in this language so I need to improve my English level but, at the same time I'm in love with it.
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Sentence 3
- If I write any word a little bit weird, I would like to apologize.
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- I would be grateful if you take a few minutes for correct this test. See you!
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- I hope you've a nice day :)
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