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  • The Documentary

  • I watched the documentary in a different language.Unfortunately, I missed something but thanks to this assignment it was a really good documentary.
  • The family decided to start carbon oil diet.
  • First, they changed their behavior.
  • Stopped driving their car, made toothpaste with a natural recipe, used sun power etc. At the end of the documentary, results were really good.
  • Most significantly they save on 100 % electricity and 97% using plastic.
  • Besides, the family didn't save too much on food only they saved %17 percent.
  • As a result, the family saved total is 52%.
  • I made a deduction that we have too much than what we need.
  • For example, in the documentary the father did not use an engine for a boat trip.
  • He paddled and enjoy the sunset.
  • It is obvious that one person can't change all around the world but we should start somewhere.
  • Like this family, if people start to doing something to for this issue I believe that the emission degree will decrease.
  • Think about every family saved at least %35.
  • This affects all around world habitat.
  • I care about this issue and start to save something.
  • I really pay attention to recycling.
  • We have separate trash if it is recycling.
  • In addition, I don't use deodorant which really damage the ozone layer.
  • In addition, choosing a healthy lifestyle affected to my choices.
  • For example, plastic containers are unhealthy.
  • It contains carcinogens.
  • So I replaced my plastic bottle with a glass bottle.
  • Consequently, I can't increase the total co2 emission myself but I teach my family, friends, relatives etc. We have to inform each other to preclude this issue.

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