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Please correct me. Thank you so much.
Today, I woke up early.
Then I ate bread with pump jam, sausages and eggs.
I went to the hospital with my brother to do some eye exams.
I had a new glasses. It was black.
Then we went into the accessories supermarket to buy the mouse for laptop.
In the afternoon, I went to the supermarket to buy a black cap but there wasn’t any cap there.
So I went home and I’m here to write about my day.
Tonight, I will have some guests.

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- Today, I woke up early.
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- I had a new glasses. It was black.
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- Then we went into the accessories supermarket to buy the mouse for laptop.
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- In the afternoon, I went to the supermarket to buy a black cap but there wasn’t any cap there.
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- So I went home and I’m here to write about my day.
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- Tonight, I will have some guests.
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