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  • My town

  • Hi, I'am Olsen and my native town il Lastourville in Gabon (Africa country).
  • My town is so beautifull, so quiet in the morning, from the afternoon to the next morning, young people are out, speaking, playing, dancing and having fun. i like go to my country on holidays with my parents and all my brothers for one month, is so great.
  • It's like all town is my parents, i meet people who know me but i don't know them, old guys who told you when you were a baby.

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    • My town is so beautifull, so quiet in the morning, from the afternoon to the next morning, young people are out, speaking, playing, dancing and having fun. i like go to my country on holidays with my parents and all my brothers for one month, is so great.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • It's like all town is my parents, i meet people who know me but i don't know them, old guys who told you when you were a baby.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3