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Watching the movie.
Yesterday my sister visited me in my new house .
And she bought C.D movie.
I made pop corn and fresh juice.
Then I asked her the film name .
She said " man in black suit ".
I told her that " really , I think ,I have seen it befor".
She said " No problem you can watche it again together ".
When we were watching the movie, My brother called us.

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- Watching the movie.
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- Yesterday my sister visited me in my new house .
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- And she bought C.D movie.
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- I made pop corn and fresh juice.
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- She said " man in black suit ".
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- I told her that " really , I think ,I have seen it befor".
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