Düzeltmeler

Şimdi düzeltmeye yardım et!Düzeltilmemiş

jycez'den mesaj - English

  • Writing a Song and need your help

  • Hello, I've writing a song and I need some help!
  • Are all my sentenses Correct?
  • Thank you very much We spend time together A never ending summer I will stay forever my love I’d never lived such a dream And I’d never felt so free I’d never loved someone so strong Oh when the time is stopped And the stars are out I wish to make you happy Come near to my heart Oh when the time is stopped And the stars are out Oh we love each other, oh we love each other Sleeping on the white sand Kissing on this warm night I’ve never dreamed of something else Waking up next to you And Smelling your perfume I’ve never hopped something else

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

  • Başlık
  • cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • Thank you very much We spend time together A never ending summer I will stay forever my love I’d never lived such a dream And I’d never felt so free I’d never loved someone so strong Oh when the time is stopped And the stars are out I wish to make you happy Come near to my heart Oh when the time is stopped And the stars are out Oh we love each other, oh we love each other Sleeping on the white sand Kissing on this warm night I’ve never dreamed of something else Waking up next to you And Smelling your perfume I’ve never hopped something else
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3