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Κείμενο από MelissaRomeroE - English

I hope be the best
I am 16 years old , I love the english music , I love the movies , and I want to travel to United States .
That's my dream , but first I must learn english but my economic posibilites don't let me . so i find this site to have friends to other countries and cultures and i hope find new friend who helps me to be the best.

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- I hope be the best
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Τίτλος
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- I am 16 years old , I love the english music , I love the movies , and I want to travel to United States .
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
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- That's my dream , but first I must learn english but my economic posibilites don't let me . so i find this site to have friends to other countries and cultures and i hope find new friend who helps me to be the best.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2