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My fiancé
My fiancé doesn't treat me like before.
If he has a problem in his work , he made it as a part of our life.
When I complain of his attitude, he say sorry.
But just sorry without any exchange in his attitude.
He foresters easly .
Also he is nervous , but he has white heart.
He has a sense of humor

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- My fiancé
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- My fiancé doesn't treat me like before.
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- If he has a problem in his work , he made it as a part of our life.
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- When I complain of his attitude, he say sorry.
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- But just sorry without any exchange in his attitude.
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- He foresters easly .
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- Also he is nervous , but he has white heart.
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- He has a sense of humor
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