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17 June
I had a good night and slept well after been tired at work.
Today I went to walsall to find out a razor strop for sharpen my open razor.
I talked about it in a shop and the guy ordered one, it'll be available on the next week.
Also I bought a body spray and I've been to the hairdresser and did a short hair style I appreciated.
Afterwards I caught a bus to Birmingham and went to John Hollingsworth & Son for a cigar.
Thereafter I went in an Italian restaurant for lunch time.
After lunch I roamed the streets to find the national sea life centre and took some nice pictures in the same time.
I hadn't enough money for the sea life centre so I went back to Walsall and got in the gym, worked out my shoulders, triceps and abdominals.

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- 17 June
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- I had a good night and slept well after been tired at work.
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- Today I went to walsall to find out a razor strop for sharpen my open razor.
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- I talked about it in a shop and the guy ordered one, it'll be available on the next week.
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- Also I bought a body spray and I've been to the hairdresser and did a short hair style I appreciated.
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- Afterwards I caught a bus to Birmingham and went to John Hollingsworth & Son for a cigar.
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- Thereafter I went in an Italian restaurant for lunch time.
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- After lunch I roamed the streets to find the national sea life centre and took some nice pictures in the same time.
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- I hadn't enough money for the sea life centre so I went back to Walsall and got in the gym, worked out my shoulders, triceps and abdominals.
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