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Emma from Belgium
Hello, I'm Emma!
I would like to talk on skype to improve my english!
I can help you with your French also :) (women only) Thanksss

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- Emma from Belgium
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句子 1
- Hello, I'm Emma!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would like to talk on skype to improve my english!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I can help you with your French also :) (women only) Thanksss
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3