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從vancoboy來的文本 - English

  • Poetry

  • The music playing in my mind.
  • The music playing in my heart, The music makes me who I am, The music, and my life again began.
  • The stories coming to my mind, The mood that hidden into heart, The spirit which is leading whole my life, The soul that beeing from the sky.

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