Korjaukset

Text from Nai-98 - English

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  • To begin with, one of the biggest problems that children face is the negative physical and psychological effects on them.
  • Nowadays, many children are exposed to the dangerous conditions due to lack of security in their workplace while they do manual labor, and they do not have the opportunity to make children’s activities.
  • Also, they have a different perception of reality because of adult influence while they do manual labor and receive poor remuneration.
  • To solve this problem, government can implement social programs and policies.
  • For instance, they can create subsidies that help the children’s families, and prohibit children labor.
  • Besides, children could receive psychological treatment, and in the case of physical illness they have medical attention.
  • As a result of such action, they could be true children.

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    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems that children face is the negative physical and psychological effects on them.
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    • Nowadays, many children are exposed to the dangerous conditions due to lack of security in their workplace while they do manual labor, and they do not have the opportunity to make children’s activities.
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    • Also, they have a different perception of reality because of adult influence while they do manual labor and receive poor remuneration.
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    • Besides, children could receive psychological treatment, and in the case of physical illness they have medical attention.
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